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Daedalus was my sire, the sun was my dream
In Minos’ grasp I watched the beams
Of heaven rain to the dust of Earth
Where I lay bound by blood and birth,
But in my eyes desire gleamed.

Could I one day, above mortals rise?
Could I one day sail forbidden skies?
I feigned to be a man of gold,
Heard praise from my admirers unfold
And I exulted in their lies.

Till I believed I was a God;
Over loved ones now I trod
With quickened step, eyes on the sun
I rose over seas and made my run
As mortals below watched in awe.

Was this a God with wings of flame?
Or a fallen angel, cursed be his name?
For I plummeted! My wings so grand
I realised, were made of sand!
But I didn’t drown. I died of shame.

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Daedalus was my sire, the sun was my dream
In Minos’ grasp I watched the beams
Of heaven rain to the dust of Earth
Where I belonged by blood and birth,
But in my eyes arrogance gleamed.
©2009-2010 ~JLithium
:iconjlithium:

Author's Comments

There's a fine line between confidence and arrogance, which is often blurred. If there's one thing I've learned, it's that arrogance makes you an idiot, and I've been that idiot before. I've thought it over and gotten past it, but I wonder if pride kills us all in some way? Is it just a phase? Is it a part of our need to be important? Am I being annoying with these questions?
No, don't answer that one :)

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:icontyc113:
Nice. I like this.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconjlithium:
Thank you very much!

--
Ever drifting down the stream--
Lingering in the golden gleam--
Life, what is it but a dream?


-Lewis Carroll
:icontyc113:
Welcome.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconhyuga-skyjade:
Another great poem. Really, you should write a book; I'd buy.

--
Hear the ticking of the clock
the sound of life itself.
No one really wants to die
to save the world.
--The Human Stain by Kamelot
:iconjlithium:
Wow, thanks a lot! At least I'll have one reader now :D

--
Ever drifting down the stream--
Lingering in the golden gleam--
Life, what is it but a dream?


-Lewis Carroll
:iconhyuga-skyjade:
:giggle: You're welcome!

--
Hear the ticking of the clock
the sound of life itself.
No one really wants to die
to save the world.
--The Human Stain by Kamelot
:icondead-neon-light:
i always loved icarus's story.
and you worked very well with it here.

oh, and it's been so long since i've found a rhyming poem i adored so absolutely.
:iconjlithium:
Thanks so much. And that means a lot coming from you :)

--
Ever drifting down the stream--
Lingering in the golden gleam--
Life, what is it but a dream?


-Lewis Carroll
:iconxsilentsinx:
This is amazing. This will be my first favorite, and I don't add favorites easily. Truly, really amazing. You have outdone yourself.

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